Mind Monologue
what hast thou thought
oh friend of old
what hast thou thought
much like ravens in air
thou hast crafted me a night
what hast thou done
oh friend of old
what hast thou done
the moon hath thou curdled
into a crimson
what hast thou bred
oh friend of old
what hast thou bred
an egg of hope hast thou hatched
amidst a lair
what hast thou gained
oh friend of old
what hast thou gained
in this moment of mine
hast thou no inkling of pain
oh friend of old
what hast thou thought
much like ravens in air
thou hast crafted me a night
what hast thou done
oh friend of old
what hast thou done
the moon hath thou curdled
into a crimson
what hast thou bred
oh friend of old
what hast thou bred
an egg of hope hast thou hatched
amidst a lair
what hast thou gained
oh friend of old
what hast thou gained
in this moment of mine
hast thou no inkling of pain
In conversation with your conscience
December 14, 2006 7:43 AM
conversation with concise?! conversation with GOD????!!!
good one paul! top
December 14, 2006 7:47 AM
oops! sorry! typo.. i meant conscience :) top
December 18, 2006 5:44 AM
I am so speechless. You definitely don't look poetic. Quiet, yes, poetic, duhh no! I really can't understand poems and derive any meaning out of it without the help of my english teachers. But you have used some pretty big words in there :)
And I love the template.
Do keep writing Paul. Hoping to see some posts in prose too :) top
March 02, 2007 7:36 AM
Hey Paul,
This is just WOWsome. I didnt kn that you have this side too. Looking forward to many more posts.
Cheerio
Zareen top
August 13, 2007 7:50 AM
what's with the old english :P ?? top
January 26, 2008 4:55 AM
neat! top